Semester 2 blog 5

http://kimloveseleni.blogspot.com/2010/02/blog-3-interview.html

I really thought that Kim's mentor interview was really well done. She wrote in her introduction about her mentor and she did a fabulous job of that as well. She used concerts not pancakes in her writing too. Her writing was very strong in the beginning and in the end and then all of her interview questions were laid out well and good questions were asked.

http://ohmyinternship.tumblr.com/post/380372247/mentorinterview

Of course Constance's pictures look professional and that's what I like about with her work. Having to do with her writing.. everything is very straight to the point! Most of her writing is make meaning early and thats the good thing about when she writes. In her mentor interview she did a good job of giving a visual of the environment and then gave a brief introduction about what he looked like as well.

http://eleniloveskim.blogspot.com/2010/02/mentor-interview.html

Once again another good mentor interview!!! Eleni did a great job of setting up the visual scene. I really like when people use that in their writing.. and I used that in mine as well.